11/29/2007

Despite having now issued a printed "official" version of Zulu-5...

I am working on it again. On an experimental basis. Because during the times lately when I have been laying awake at O-Dark-Thirty lo these many mornings with a cat kneading my head and another cat crushing me under his 19 lbs of fur and muscle, it occured to me that the whole thing with the 'borgs trapped outside didn't work.

So I changed it. On an experimental basis.

I've now got them hooking all those batteries into the power system proper. And I made Trouble a bit more angry in that exchange with Rollins. And changed the end of the scene where Rage jumps for the mail boat at the end.

I may do more editing on it. I dunno.

Can't get the characters out of my head now.

As a writer, you know you've got a good thing going if you want to know what happened after the end.

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